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Title: Kiss Scene On The Balcony
Fandom: Viewfinder
Pairing: Fei Long x Akihito
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none I guess...
DISCLAIMER: Characters belong to Yamane Ayano sensei and I make no profit from this fanart.

This fanart was inspired by the kiss scene between Akihito and Fei Long in the Chapter 13 of sunflower1343's fanfiction "Therapy". I found the whole fic, and that scene in particular, so beautifully written that I wanted to do a fanart for it, and after a long, long time I've finally brought myself to complete it XD If you want to read a very good Asami/Fei Long/Akihito fanfiction, then I recommend you to read this, if you haven't done it yet :-)

I hope I made justice to the beauty of this scene for how it is written in the fanfiction :-) many thanks to all who will take a look at my fanart and leave a comment ^_^ and a special thank to sunflower1343 for giving me the permission to illustrate this scene of her fic! (don't know if you remember, since I asked you so long ago, but thanks, anyway ^_^)





Kiss Scene On The Balcony (Therapy)





Comments

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jukebox_csi
Jan. 4th, 2013 04:12 pm (UTC)
Oh wow! That's beautiful! I love the details on Fei Long's clothes.
immorta_beloved
Jan. 4th, 2013 04:16 pm (UTC)
thank you so much for watching and commenting!!! ^_^
clair1973
Jan. 4th, 2013 04:40 pm (UTC)
wonderful wonderful fic from shelly and this pic... just lovely

thank you for finishing it and sharing! :)
immorta_beloved
Jan. 4th, 2013 04:47 pm (UTC)
Thanks for commenting! ^_^ glad you liked my sketch :-)

thanks for stopping by to comment and for your lovely comliment ^_^
ameris57
Jan. 4th, 2013 05:19 pm (UTC)
It really is marvelous. Makes me want to read the story again. Thanks for the sharing.

Big kisses and hugs.
immorta_beloved
Jan. 4th, 2013 11:05 pm (UTC)
Ahah, seems like I inspired many people to come back to read it xD I'm very happy of this, I personally love that fic and I'm glad to let others know or remember about it ^_^

Thanks for your lovely compliments! I'm glad you liked it ^_^

~Hugs~
sunflower1343
Jan. 4th, 2013 05:51 pm (UTC)
Oh that's so beautiful! You put all the feelings into it that I tried to put in my writing. Thank you so much for creating this. May I link to it from that chapter?
immorta_beloved
Jan. 4th, 2013 11:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment! ^_^ It has a great meaning to me that I could convey the feelings you put into your writing ^_^ I'm glad you find this beautiful and appropriate for that scene ^_^
Of course you may link this from chapter 13! ^_~ it's a pleasure for me too :-)

Thank you for your compliments ^_~
anima57
Jan. 4th, 2013 06:31 pm (UTC)
lovely. so emotion ridden.
immorta_beloved
Jan. 4th, 2013 11:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting ^_^ glad you liked it ^_^
char_comet
Jan. 4th, 2013 08:10 pm (UTC)
Although I don't like the pairing, your drawing is very beautiful and appropriate for the scene of the fic ^_^
immorta_beloved
Jan. 4th, 2013 11:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your lovely compliments ^_^ I deeply appreciate that you looked at this though you deslike the pairing. Thanks for commenting, I'm glad this was appropriate to describe that scene :-)
dragonchiclet
Jan. 4th, 2013 09:53 pm (UTC)
Wow what a pic!! Immediately went to the story and read as much of that as LJ would let me today (very slow) - and thanks for the recommendation, makes me realize I only know the tip of the ice berg yet ...

Love the "plant"-language in your pictures...stems of flowering bush entwining around a pillar in "Fei on the balcony" - seeking hold. And here it's the "burning rose bush" hoooot! Also suggestive that Aki and Fei have both passed hell fires to arrive at this point...

Those two are strange and beautiful together ... innocent boyish Aki, elegant but emotionally stunted Fei, wow
immorta_beloved
Jan. 6th, 2013 06:45 pm (UTC)
oh, thank you very much for your compliments!! ^_^ I'm glad I could let you know the existence of this story, since it is really a wonderful fic, definitely worth reading :-)

I'm glad you noticed that I love to give the flowers in my drawings a meaning ^_^ I think that flowers, along with the colour of the sky, are elements that, both in fanart and fanfiction could be used to express the charaters' feelings :-) and I'm happy you noticed the rose bush looks indeed like a burning fire, since it represented also the fire of passion here :-)

I'm glad you like this couple for how it looks both here and in the original story :-) At first I desliked Akihito and I didn't want him near Fei Long, but with time I learnt to appreciate his character and I think that he does not look so bad with Fei...even though Akihito belongs to Asami and so the Fei x Aki pairing is not very popular...

thank you for commenting and for so many lovely compliments :-) I'm glad you let me know your opinion :-)
dragonchiclet
Jan. 24th, 2013 07:46 pm (UTC)
"definitely worth reading" more like life changing ...

"I love to give the flowers in my drawings a meaning" am thinking back on that beautiful picture of Fei in the bath, you know where everone wanted to tug the towel off his hips *g* - but of course half nakedness is more artistic, more suggestive *virtuous nod* - well those scattered petals, "entblättern" = de-leafing, a German word meaning ... striptease *g* What was in your mind - I'm sure *nonono* you're not so base minded? Would interest me.

"I'm happy you noticed the rose bush looks indeed like a burning fire, since it represented also the fire of passion here :-)" well, imo the passion comes later, at this point they are both too tentative - Aki steeling himself against having to abandon / Fei against being abandoned - to feel burning passion ... but no matter, so the plants give a peek into the future? like tea leafs? anyway it's lovely

"I'm glad you like this couple for how it looks both here and in the original story" actually it's canon! But written before it came to pass like this in canon (Fei asking Aki to stay with him). What I love about this pairing, and what comes across so touchingly in the story, and amazingly in your pic - is the contradictory nature of the figures - the taller, more elegant, obviously stronger, swooping-down-upon-offender, serpent!Fei - whom we get to know as a needy, traumatized, eager-to-please child. And Aki - in T-shirt, looking up, his face being cupped, hair like a kid ... he's the strong one here, the one who holds all (heart)-strings in his hands. That's so touching, so exciting. Who could resist them, the way they're written / drawn here !?!

j0h4nn4
Jan. 5th, 2013 01:07 pm (UTC)
I like this drawing!! ^_^
immorta_beloved
Jan. 5th, 2013 07:20 pm (UTC)
thank you for your compliment!!!!! ^_~
seichirou
Jan. 5th, 2013 04:50 pm (UTC)
Beautiful! It looks amazing!
immorta_beloved
Jan. 6th, 2013 06:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you for stopping by and commenting!! ^_^ I'm glad you like this :-)
wilhelminac
Jan. 5th, 2013 07:50 pm (UTC)
I haven't read the story but your drawing looks amazing! A wonderful job.
immorta_beloved
Jan. 5th, 2013 10:29 pm (UTC)
thank you for your lovely compliment and for stopping by to comment even though you haven't read the story ^_^ I recommend you to read it, I found it very well written and beautiful :-) thank you!!
skadalex
Jan. 7th, 2013 04:50 pm (UTC)
The drawing looks beautiful! All the details: of flowers, Fei's clothes and balcony structure, everything looks very good. It took a lot of work I guess :). Does it exist in color too?
And thanks for the tip on the story, I haven't red the fiction yet but, it looks like it's about really passionate relationship between those two. I've never seen them anywhere else as a real couple.
immorta_beloved
Jan. 7th, 2013 08:51 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your compliments!! glad you liked it ^_^

Yes, it took a lot of work, indeed... but I'm glad I could draw everything in great detail (sometimes, when I can't do something properly, I'm able to re-do it a million times, since I'm satisfied with the result even in the slightest details xDDXD this time I tried four different poses and scenes for this drawing that's why it took me so long xD) :-) And there is no coloured version, since I chose to do a B/W sketch and if I tried to colour it with pastel or water colours it would look too shady... (I can't use PhotoShopXD) I prefer to leave it like this...it looks more..romantic, to me ^_^

And I recommend you to red the fic since it's very well written and emotional :-) and it is not just Akihito x Fei, but if you're interested in seeing them as a real couple, then you're looking in the right direction by reading that fic ;-) I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I did :-)

thank you for watching and commenting!! ^_^
radcat38
Jan. 8th, 2013 06:02 am (UTC)
Oh! So nice!!
immorta_beloved
Jan. 8th, 2013 08:16 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your compliment!! ^_~
marybala
Jan. 10th, 2013 11:19 pm (UTC)
lots of details ! perspective ! reflections on the windows ! omg ! O M G !!! this is good ! This is a pretty important moment in the Therapy fic, too. sweet idea. Thank you for sharing
immorta_beloved
Jan. 12th, 2013 03:13 pm (UTC)
OH, thank you for such amazing compliments!! ^_^ thanks for appreciating the details here, they took me a lot of work, I'm glad more than one noticed! ^_-

thank you for commenting!
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