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Fanfiction: Sweet Dream

Title: Sweet Dream
Fandom: Viewfinder
Characters: Yoh, Fei Long
Pairing: Fei Long x Yoh
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: YAOI, graphic sex, reversed roles (uke!Yoh); PWP, no plot, pure smut, set after the events in "Finder no Rakuin" (after the two were lovers for quite some time IMO).
DISCLAIMER: Characters and original story belong to Yamane Ayano sensei. What I write is pure fiction and I make no profit from it.
Summary: dream and reality get mixed up in Yoh's mind and fantasy...

Author's Notes: this is my first time writing a pure smut (I mean, I've written smut in my fics before, but there was always a little plot, unlike this time, and I wanted to try something different). And I know I'm breaking canon by making Yoh be the uke, yet I like to imagine them as switchers, and I like Fei Long's dominant side.
Thanks a lot to krambi003 for beta reading this ^_^ thank you my friend, if this is appreciated, is also thanks to your help ^_~
I hope you'll like this short piece. Let me know your opinion, comments and critics are equally welcomed ^_^



Hands ran all over his body, caressing his skin, as gentle as the touch of a feather, and impossibly arousing.
They moved slowly on him, teasing sensually, giving him a glimpse of heavenly pleasures, before stopping for one second or two, enough to make him moan in frustration and need. Then they resumed their sweet and cruel teasing.

The man was trembling under such sweet torture.
He gasped, his breath becoming heavier from lust, as long and elegant fingers toyed with his nipples, twisting them.
A moan left his lips, red and swollen by so many kisses and bites.

It felt good. It felt like heaven.
There was not a single part of him that did not receive the sweetest pleasures, not one single inch of his skin left neglected. He could feel his lover's lips on his nipples, his hands stroking him between his thighs and on his firm buttocks, caressing the tender skin hidden there, slightly touching the tight and twitching opening, the secret door to sinful desire.
He felt those insatiable hands all over his body. He knew whom they belonged to, yet he felt them touch him in so many places at the same time that for a second he doubted they could all belong to just one man.
Yet he didn't think about it too much, allowing his mind and body to surrender to the pleasure those skilled hands gave him.

The gasps and moans that left his throat were suddenly silenced by a pair of sweet lips.
His beautiful and desired lover was now on top of him, kissing him passionately, a honey-sweet tongue invading his willing mouth. The assault to his lips was long, and eager, and forceful, to the point of leaving them both breathless, forcing his attacker to break the kiss, gasping for air.
Their glances locked, flames of lust sparkling in their irises, as he looked up at his lover, whose eyes were devouring him.
He shivered as those ebony locks of hair caressed his skin lightly. He reached out to touch it, feel its softness on his fingertips, stroke his lover's porcelain skin...

As he ran his fingers through that mass of raven silk, his lover's lips descended on his neck. Their erections rubbed together, huge, and hard, and needy of everything lust had to offer, the man on top of him demanding it from his lover's body, he surrendering willingly, glad to fulfil that request...

Take me… Please, take me…

Slick fingers travelled down his belly to his groin, to end their journey between his spread thighs, then between his cheeks, finding again his opening and slightly touching it. The touch made his whole body shiver: he gripped the silky sheets tightly and bit on his lower lip, preventing himself from making more sounds, from moaning shamelessly.

Two of those fingers slipped inside of him, rubbing against his sweet spot, again and again. The velvety lips of his lover now wrapped around the head of his engorged member, added to the agonising pleasure of having those skilled fingers twist inside of him, made him toss his head back, this time unable to hold back a moan.
He could have died from this pleasure… it felt like a dream…

His legs were risen and spread even wider, leaving him exposed and vulnerable, and, without delay, his lover penetrated him with a hard thrust.
His screams of pleasure echoed in his ears and on the walls as his lover kept mercilessly thrusting into him, sliding so deep inside, each movement, strong and powerful, clouding his sight and mind with lust and shattering his control and consciousness, making him writhe helplessly under him.

It was useless to try to hold back his moans, nor to delay his orgasm, now that he was being rammed in such a brutal pace, his whole body on fire.

At one particularly hard thrust, he let out a frustrated, keening moan.
More… he silently begged.
He could feel himself getting closer and closer to climax, his body ready to explode…

Aah…

His lover was now masturbating him deliciously, squeezing and stroking his erection as roughly as he fucked him…

God, it felt incredible, he was so close…

…So close…



Yoh woke up suddenly, breathing heavily.
He was covered in sweat, and shivering from head to toe, like he had been hit by a giant wave and brutally thrown on the shore.
What a dream… he thought, still lying on the soft sheets, eyes still closed. He did not look around, trying to keep the memories from his dream in his mind for as long as possible, wishing they were real…

Still keeping his eyes shut tight, he reached out below, between his legs, feeling the unmistakable hardness of a needy erection.
Reliving his dream with the man he most wanted to do those things to him, he slipped his hand inside his underwear and, slowly stroking his member, started from where his dream had left off… alone…

Then he felt it.
A cool hand gently caressing his inner thighs.
Then, swatting away Yoh’s hand, it started to move slowly up and down his erection.

Yoh’s eyes snapped open in surprise, and he froze when his glance met those deep, lustful amethyst eyes he had so intently just dreamt of.
With predatory moves, Fei Long pulled the silky covers away, exposing Yoh’s nakedness to his hungry eyes, and climbed on top of him, pinning him down as he kissed him deeply and thoroughly.

Yoh, stunned, kissed back tentatively, as the very hands of his dreams stroked his erection, expertly and very gently, from time to time squeezing a bit harder and rubbing a thumb on the slit.

Moaning helplessly under his former master’s ministrations, a part of Yoh’s mind was still wondering what the hell was Liu Fei Long doing here, in Taiwan, on his bed, pleasuring him.
He was not sure he was fully awake. Maybe his mind was playing tricks on him…

A scream of pleasure escaped his mouth as he shuddered and came releasing his frustrated desire, a scream that died on Fei Long’s beautiful lips as he bent down and kissed him ferociously, with all the lust both of them had repressed for months. This time Yoh returned the kiss with passion, forgetting all the questions crossing his confused and clouded mind.

When their lips parted, Yoh still panting, starting to recover from the delicious orgasm Fei Long had given him, the Baishe leader bent his head again and licked the stains of semen on Yoh’s stomach and chest, swallowing and savouring every single drop of it.
This must be a dream, Yoh thought again, keeping his eyes closed. I must be imagining things… he’s not here…

When Fei Long raised his head again, and Yoh opened his eyes, expecting that heavenly vision to vanish instantaneously, their glances met, this time for real.
Yoh looked up at his lover’s face, enraptured, enjoying the caress of that waterfall of black strands of silk on his skin, moaning quietly at the feeling.
His lustful dream was nothing compared to this reality.

The beautiful, dangerous Dragon licked his red lips sensually, a predatory grin on them.
Glancing down, between his lover’s legs, Yoh saw his erection, still trapped in his trousers, still needy and unsatisfied. With a small smile, he unzipped those black pants and slipped a hand inside, not finding the obstacle of any underwear to prevent him from reaching his prize easily. A low moan left Fei Long’s lips as his manhood was caressed at a slow, torturing pace, his former subordinate surely planning on making him lose control.

While being so skilfully stroked, the Baishe leader grinned deviously. “What were you dreaming, to arouse you so much, Yoh?” he asked all of a sudden, his voice low and erotic.

“You…” came the honest answer, uttered almost inaudibly, as Yoh kissed his lover’s neck, gently sucking on his alabaster skin.

“Were you so lonely without me, that a dream was enough to satisfy you?” he asked teasingly, smiling. “I can’t possibly allow that.”

Elegant yet strong hands pushed Yoh down on the mattress. His legs were once again spread wide and he wrapped them around his lover’s waist, ready to receive what he had been yearning for.

He looked up once again at a very aroused Fei Long. The spark in his eyes promised him a whole night of debauchery and excess.

It’s going to be a long, sleepless night, Yoh though with satisfaction, as he felt his lover’s hands all over him.

And he surely would not mistake that reality with any dream again.

Comments

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j0h4nn4
Jun. 6th, 2013 01:46 am (UTC)
Thank you! It was a good variation refresh.^^
immorta_beloved
Jun. 6th, 2013 03:50 pm (UTC)
Hank you so much for reading and for your kind compliments ^_^
portisheart
Jun. 6th, 2013 08:02 am (UTC)
well written! ^_^ nice, smutty but not crude pwp, rather enjoyably erotic.
i wouldn't mind reading this "event" from Fei Long's POV too, tho' ^^
immorta_beloved
Jun. 6th, 2013 03:52 pm (UTC)
Thanks!! Glad you liked it ^_^
Though I don't plan on writing another OS as sequel, you gave me a good idea ^_~ Though I have far too many un completed fanfics to finish and post xD
portisheart
Jun. 6th, 2013 06:16 pm (UTC)
I have far too many uncompleted fanfics to finish and post

welcome into the club XDDDD
immorta_beloved
Jun. 6th, 2013 09:06 pm (UTC)
XDxDxD I am a hopeless case, really xD I have 10 OS in progress (in man of these I only have to write the smut and the end and I know what I want to write, but inspiration is not always with me and when i is there's no time to write -.-" xD) I hope to find enough time to at least finish 2 of those in this week xD
Do you have a lot o works in progress, too? ^_^
portisheart
Jun. 7th, 2013 06:00 am (UTC)
true, smut isn't as easy to write as to read XDD - if you don't want to fall into the overdone style "c*ck-a$$-f*ck", and bring a bit of decent vocabulary and variety into the action ..LOL

i don't have too much "in progress", i think maybe 2 or 3 - but not OS, rather series - aka there's longer work to come there.
and i have many many ideas i planned for months in my head. even 2-3 years? mostly crossovers with Fei Long & his lover #1 Orochimaru, and all other guys living/loving with them (see my chinese new year banner 2013.. and add ~4 dudes.. erh creatures from ebooks.. and maybe 1-2 OC). gives enough smut to write for the next 20 years XDDD. only to write how the hell they landed in hong kong would give around 20 OS.

plus the series i started after the contest, with the duplicate Fei Longs from parallel universes - there are 4 of them, each one with his past story, and whatever happens once in hong kong with Fei Long and the 3 others. another series of minimum 4+4 chapters, and for those i'd like to make 3D pix too.
hence, 2 totally different universes, multichapters (=_o)

i need a break from real life - like 1 year - where somebody else does my house chores (i have 18 meoows), does my work, and feeds me, so i can dedicate myself to "real" stuff like writing & 3D drawing. XDD
shandini
Jun. 6th, 2013 01:17 pm (UTC)
Wow. O_o That was really smexy. <3
immorta_beloved
Jun. 6th, 2013 03:53 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading and commenting ^_~
seichirou
Jun. 6th, 2013 02:51 pm (UTC)
wow...nicely done!! it's amazing!
immorta_beloved
Jun. 6th, 2013 03:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your amazing compliments! Glad you enjoyed it ^_^
lady_valarien
Jun. 6th, 2013 09:18 pm (UTC)
Oh, that was simply brilliant :)

It was such a nice surprise to see that you posted a new fic.
It is always a pleasure to see/read something from you.

Thank you for sharing!!!
immorta_beloved
Jun. 9th, 2013 12:13 am (UTC)
Hank you for reading and for your wonderful compliments ^_~

I'm glad that seeing this pleased you ^_^ thank you for taking a look at this!! ^_~
dragonchiclet
Jun. 7th, 2013 08:55 pm (UTC)
"yet I like to imagine them as switchers" not only you ;-)

Very niiiice. I especially loved Fei so diligently servicing Yoh - he really deserves it.

Thank you for sharing
immorta_beloved
Jun. 9th, 2013 12:17 am (UTC)
Oh, I'm lad I'm not the only one xD I was a little afraid at first, cause I like them as switchers, but now after finder no Rakuin making Fei be Yoh's seme would be like making Asami be Aki's uke xD

Glad you liked it ^_~ thank you for reading and for your comment ^_~

PS: I'd like to apologise for not replying to your last comment on my Fanart "fallen angel" but I hadn't logged on LJ for a long time and in the end. Thought it was ridiculous to reply a month later xD I didn't mean to ignore it :-)
dragonchiclet
Jun. 10th, 2013 10:28 am (UTC)
I'm still checking my account every 2 days or so - but ok, I started out this winter, so I guess it's still the "honey-moon" phase ;-)
ameris57
Jun. 8th, 2013 10:24 am (UTC)
Hmmm great. Want a bite too now. See forward to your next writing. Big kisses and hugs.
immorta_beloved
Jun. 9th, 2013 12:18 am (UTC)
Thank you for commenting! Glad you liked it ^_^

Hugs and kisses to you, too ^_~
paunakan_jen
Jul. 15th, 2013 02:51 pm (UTC)
Very hot! I always thought they would be the kind of couple that would switch so this works for me :)
immorta_beloved
Jul. 20th, 2013 11:20 pm (UTC)
thank you so much for leaving a comment ^_^ I though nobody would read it after all this time it had been posted xD

thank you for your compliments, I'm glad this makes sense to you :-)
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